The obstacles that the characters face in my book is surving another day. They are not excepted in normal society because of the mistakes they made in life. Some may become suicdal because of the mistakes they mad because they have guilt.They also have gangs as an obstacle for them to suceed. They have to obey what the gang want them to do in jail. An example of that is if your gang tell you to fight someone at lunch you gonna have to do it if you know them or not. That is an obstacle for them not o maybe get out with early with good behavior. It also can stop you from getting an education from jail also. So when you do get out there in the world you wont be the person like natsniel was talking about. The person with no skills and no education. Pretty much everyday is an obstacle in jail. In able to live and survive.
I knoow i have to be better than my parents. I will never do half the things they did to me and my brothers and sisters. i will treat all my childen with love and care and copassion. I will be there for them wwhen they need me the most. even if me and there mom are seperated i will make sure that my kids will have what they need. I will never be a dead beat dad. Ima be there for my familly just like how my grandpaents was there for me.
I like that you're able to realize the mistakes that have been made in your past and know that you can do better and will overcome them. I also like that you distinguish yourself from them and say that you will never be that person and that you'll grow from it.
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